Man I should really stop posting these unedited chapters… but I just can’t resist the temptation of getting a chapter out sooner (; – ;).
Well, I’m going to be working on a short story after this chapter titled “Fuzuroi no Mikantachi” Tbh, I have no idea what it’s about, but one of my editors (Excalibur) suggested/begged/peer pressured me into doing it. Well, I hope it will be interesting.
Then, without further ado, please enjoy the unedited chapter written in Islamic (or not, I mean you could totally wait for the editors to translate it from Shurimese to English)
Excalibur: First of all, it’s “Fuzoroi no Mikantachi”, okay!? Second of all, it is a Rewrite short story, for those out there who read the visual novel by Key. Also, if anyone have any thoughts or commentary on our prose, please speak up. I look forward to any criticism.